I want people to edit my small space may be teachers or students in English colleges.?
Here are a few lines for this school it:. Questions found in the kitchen behind her sleep on the floor. Desk chairs in the kitchen is open. Blood from her wrist and small pool of blood near her hand. Weapons can kill. Also found blood on the floor near her hands on. Holding a knife on the counter found missing. The blood found from the kitchen to the living room. The lamp is reduced. On the floor next to the victim on foot. Victims found sleeping on the carpet between the chair and sofa on the left side of her.
Looks good but when you change the verb tense. "The lighting is reduced." Should be, or just 'fall'.
A Sprained Wrist, A Lamp And A FAIL Drumset
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